Argument Reflection

I did have a clear claim. However, I am uncertain that it was within my thesis statement. I did notice very much evidence to support my claim but it was all relevant and useful information. I had one counter-claim that I disproved to show my point. The paragraph didn't begin with a hook and I'm uncertain if it had a thesis statement. I only had one paragraph and it did read somewhat smoothly but the first sentence is kind of long. The evidence did make sense and supported my side of the argument. I did avoid plagiarism and used a small in text citation. The bibliography is present and properly formatted. There are a few mistakes involving missing commas and long sentences. I didn't think of asking my peers for advice buy probably should have.